Goth: Young Lovers at War

From award-winning writer Paul Allor and Verotik alumni Seth Adams!

When a young Visigoth warrior named Dolphus finds himself spurned by his lover, Gerda, he throws himself into battle, seeking an honorable death that never seems to come. As desperation takes hold, Gerda works to save him... preferably in the most painful way possible. It's the third-century CE, and love... love will tear them apart.

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I came on to this project later in its process. I received a proof copy of the art, and a copy of the script, and made notes on how the script might develop to increase its drama and impact while staying within the bounds of what was already drawn. I also gave Paul notes on his lettering draft, to the same effect.